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 Post subject: Re: Book One - Corrections & Suggestions
PostPosted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 11:56 am 
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Everything in the main storyline is considered "canon", which means it really did happen in the story.
Fan-art and fan-fics are "non-canon", which means that they didn't happen.
The fillers are a mix of "canon" and "non-canon". Some of them actually happened, some of them didn't happen.

The filler in question fit nicely between the two comics that it was nestled between, it was a believable reaction shot, and it improved the story flow. That's why I've thought that it was canon - that it really happened.

Since Tom didn't put it in the book, that's kinda like Tom saying that it never happened and thus makes it non-canon.

I write too much text, and explain things poorly. I'll shut-up now. ^^;;


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 Post subject: Re: Book One - Corrections & Suggestions
PostPosted: Fri Jan 16, 2009 11:57 pm 
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Nah, that was a pretty good summery of it. I too miss that page

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 Post subject: Re: Book One - Corrections & Suggestions
PostPosted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 5:14 am 
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Thank you for all your work finding the typos in the book. They've all been squashed out and a new, second edition of the book has been sent to the publishers. It should be available to those who order my book from Indiplanet by early next week.

I will be publicly announcing Twokinds: Book One's sale on Indiplanet next week.

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 Post subject: Re: Book One - Corrections & Suggestions
PostPosted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 5:39 am 
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That's great news Tom!

You might want to make a note about it already, for those who have already ordered your book from indyplanet in the last couple of days.

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 Post subject: Re: Book One - Corrections & Suggestions
PostPosted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 6:41 am 
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It's their own fault if they ordered it without me telling them it was available. I didn't give the link to anyone.

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 Post subject: Re: Book One - Corrections & Suggestions
PostPosted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 11:59 am 
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Yes! good thing my parents are too cheap to pay back the money I gave them. I will wait for the announcement then.

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 Post subject: Re: Book One - Corrections & Suggestions
PostPosted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 11:29 am 
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Found a couple not mentioned

Ch 2 pg 24 panel 3
"You're betrayal has awaken my memories" should be "your"

Ch 2 pg 25 panel 4
"Oh no, you're foot" should be "your"

Ch 2 pg 25 panel 6
"Without you're memories" should be "your"

Ch 2 pg 26 panel 5
"He wont try that again" should be "won't"

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 Post subject: Re: Book One - Corrections & Suggestions
PostPosted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 12:04 pm 
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Thank you Escobar. I have added them to the first post.

I can't believe I missed 4 rather clear ones; my English needs more training (why couldn't I have been English born, sigh)...

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 Post subject: Re: Book One - Corrections & Suggestions
PostPosted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 7:40 pm 
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Fireball0236 wrote:
my English needs more training (why couldn't I have been English born, sigh)...

Being English born isn't that great...unless you're an Australian because we're just naturally awesome

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 Post subject: Re: Book One - Corrections & Suggestions
PostPosted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 8:05 pm 
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Aw dang it, I found a loose page

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Euh, for the record, there is an edit button ^^.

My bad. It didn't occur to me at the time.

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 Post subject: Re: Book One - Corrections & Suggestions
PostPosted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 1:44 am 
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Euh, for the record, there is an edit button ^^.
And I don't really know the accent of 'Australian English', British so far I love.

Send Tom an email about the pages falling out.

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 Post subject: Re: Book One - Corrections & Suggestions
PostPosted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 4:26 am 
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Two more

Ch 4 pg 27 panel 5
"After all the time We've been together". Lower case on the "we've"

Ch 4 pg 31 panel 5
"It's just isn't normal". Either "It just isn't normal" or "It's just not normal"

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 Post subject: Re: Book One - Corrections & Suggestions
PostPosted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 4:35 am 
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Thank you again. Added to the first post.

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 Post subject: Re: Book One - Corrections & Suggestions
PostPosted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 8:14 pm 
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hey i just got my book and it looks great. the colours amazing and it feels nice and smooth but you should check the publishers binding method for the next run they used a fast binding and it seems to miss the ocasonal page, so it just falls out if your not watching for it


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 Post subject: Re: Book One - Corrections & Suggestions
PostPosted: Fri Jan 23, 2009 1:13 am 
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Silver-paws, check this topic, and send Tom an email if you have pages falling out of your book:
viewtopic.php?f=13&t=9407 .

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