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#31 Post by InceptionBwaaa »

red.wolf wrote:Really hoping this isnt a dead story.
Me too.
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#32 Post by Jonesy »

red.wolf wrote:Really hoping this isnt a dead story.
It's not. Chapter 7 took a while to write, since I've been busy with university. It's finished now, but I've also been having some delays in getting feedback from the proof-readers. I'm still working away on chapter 8 in the meantime.

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#33 Post by red.wolf »

Well if you need anything done let me know. Being involved with a story like this would be cool and im sure there would be some things I could learn.
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#34 Post by InceptionBwaaa »

red.wolf wrote:Well if you need anything done let me know. Being involved with a story like this would be cool and im sure there would be some things I could learn.

Same here, Jonesy. Feel free to send your rough draft to me through email, I'd love to help edit and revise.
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#35 Post by Jonesy »

Thanks for the offers guys, I'll keep it in mind.

By the way, I'm about ready to post chapter 7. Just doing some last minute checks, and will post in a couple of days.

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#36 Post by Jonesy »

Here it is! Sorry it took so long.

As planned, the time has finally come to take the story down for now, in preparation for future publishing of the re-written version. It's a pretty bittersweet moment; I've got a lot of great memories about uploading chapters and eagerly anticipating people's responses. I'd like to thank you all for following the story all these years, and I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. I'll be keeping the thread itself up for now in order to keep you all updated on where H&L goes from here.​

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#37 Post by InceptionBwaaa »

I always d'aww at least once every chapter. This one made me d'aww a lot. Good one, Jonesy.
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#38 Post by Bellhead »

I just finished the story so far. As said before, it reads like an award-winning novel, and I love it. The drama and suspense here, in terms of not only the racial relations but also the personal ones, is something I don't often see.

Well worth staying up until quarter past eleven to finish the most recent three chapters, keep up the good work.
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#39 Post by red.wolf »

Are you doing the NWC? Scares me a bit to think of what I would go against if you cranked something out.
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#40 Post by Jonesy »

red.wolf wrote:Are you doing the NWC? Scares me a bit to think of what I would go against if you cranked something out.
No, I'm not. Maybe one day I will, but I'm happy working on my current works for now.

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#41 Post by Jonesy »

Here's the next one. To keep up participation between updates, I'm considering an ask-the-cast segment. Any interest?

As planned, the time has finally come to take the story down for now, in preparation for future publishing of the re-written version. It's a pretty bittersweet moment; I've got a lot of great memories about uploading chapters and eagerly anticipating people's responses. I'd like to thank you all for following the story all these years, and I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. I'll be keeping the thread itself up for now in order to keep you all updated on where H&L goes from here.​

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#42 Post by InceptionBwaaa »

Jonesy wrote:ask-the-cast
I love these! Okay, okay!

This one's for Jakob: How do you feel about Keidran(as if he knows about them, because he probably doesn't)?
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#43 Post by Jonesy »

InceptionBwaaa wrote:
Jonesy wrote:ask-the-cast
I love these! Okay, okay!

This one's for Jakob: How do you feel about Keidran(as if he knows about them, because he probably doesn't)?
Nice one! I'll add it to the list. I'm thinking I'll post the answers sporadically between updates.

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#44 Post by red.wolf »

"Snowpusad"- not sure why this cracked me up so much but i loved it.
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#45 Post by Bellhead »

Sorry I'm a little late to the party. Computer troubles.

Love this, love it a lot. Obligatory "ooh! he's jeeeaaaalooouuus!" and subsequent "best be careful in public, your feels are showing". I got a kick out of the "you-and-I-sharing-a-cabin-during-my-estrus". I had my theories about her trying something like that. :wink:

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For Rakai: You carry a sword nearly if not every time you leave the house. How often do you have to use it? And on whom?

For Lord Kingsley: What are your thoughts/opinions on the recent events with your son and the shelter? With all that has happened thus far, are you sure it's still worth everything that has happened?
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