Human & Lupusad - Of Men and Wolves [Mature Content]

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Re: Human & Lupusad - Of Men and Wolves (Current Chapter: 27) [Mature Content]

#286 Post by Jonesy »

Damn. I've actually been giving that sequel idea some serious thought this week. Still pretty bare-bones, but there's always the future.

Anyway, onwards!

As planned, the time has finally come to take the story down for now, in preparation for future publishing of the re-written version. It's a pretty bittersweet moment; I've got a lot of great memories about uploading chapters and eagerly anticipating people's responses. I'd like to thank you all for following the story all these years, and I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. I'll be keeping the thread itself up for now in order to keep you all updated on where H&L goes from here.​

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#287 Post by amenon »

First responder this time around :P

- Jakob being pretty laissez-faire, all-in-all
- Is 'Kanti' a reference? :)
- "You'll have to see where our daughter Tala got to" seems like an odd turn of phrase and situation
- Jakob's been getting better at the language, I guess. (I think. I fail to remember if he already spoke it earlier? But makes sense, either way.)
- Sharing a bed! Such lax morality! Bring me my fainting couch and smelling salts!
- "Actually the mortar is the bowl" :grin:
- 'That page was slightly dog-eared, she noticed' :grin:

Beware the cute ones! At some point, someone is going to have to say no to a cub.
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went on without a hitch [went off without a hitch, maybe?]
the only viable option to keep the district fed to put an end to the uprising [accidentally a word]
Jakob to made his way to the kitchen
It’s a message all need right now. [we all need, maybe?]
does that you two are getting married [accidentally a word]
Preferably when I didn’t have so much on my mind. [when I don't]
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#288 Post by Jonesy »

amenon wrote:- Jakob being pretty laissez-faire, all-in-all
I'm not sure what you mean by this.
amenon wrote:- Is 'Kanti' a reference? :)
Nope. Have I accidentally referenced something?
amenon wrote:- Jakob's been getting better at the language, I guess. (I think. I fail to remember if he already spoke it earlier? But makes sense, either way.)
Zyanya taught it to him over the timeskip.

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#289 Post by amenon »

Jonesy wrote:I'm not sure what you mean by this.
He's happy to let the bigger crisis be somebody else's problem.
Jonesy wrote:Nope. Have I accidentally referenced something?
Kanti Keiser.
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#290 Post by Jonesy »

amenon wrote:
Jonesy wrote:I'm not sure what you mean by this.
He's happy to let the bigger crisis be somebody else's problem.
He's very reluctant about it, but I might have managed to not make that clear. Don't worry; he'll pick up the slack as he recovers.
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Jonesy wrote:Nope. Have I accidentally referenced something?
Kanti Keiser.
Huh. Wasn't aware of that. Just picked the usual random name from a list of Native American names.

Anyway, I've started a little drawing project. I'm hoping to make a piece of H&L art based on a chapter titlepage that really stood out to me in the comic DMZ. It's about halfway done (and is only a pencil drawing), but I'll post it when it's finished.

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#291 Post by AndreRhineDavis »

Jonesy wrote:
amenon wrote:
Jonesy wrote:I'm not sure what you mean by this.
He's happy to let the bigger crisis be somebody else's problem.
He's very reluctant about it, but I might have managed to not make that clear. Don't worry; he'll pick up the slack as he recovers.
I certainly got the impression that he very much wants to get back involved in it all, and only through everyone else coercing him that his health is more important has he agreed to take it easy.
Jonesy wrote:Only two replies this time? You're breaking my heart, guys. (;_;)
I have been ready every chapter as it's coming out Jonesy! Sorry that I haven't been commenting so much, most of the time I just cbf thinking of anything to say :P

But yeah, absolutely loving it all so far, of course :D

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#292 Post by Jonesy »

Here's a link to that artwork I mentioned I'd made. I couldn't upload it here, and you can't access it on the Chucklefish Forums, so I had to make use of Weasyl again.

https://www.weasyl.com/submission/13935 ... -meets-dmz

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#293 Post by Bellhead »

So he's getting locked into a wedding (and other stuff) with a woman he's not in love with, amidst a rebellion/civil war. Fun times indeed.

At least things have somewhat calmed down as of late.

I really liked how the interperson relations played out in this chapter.. The characters felt real. You are quite skilled with your scenarios, I'll tell you that.
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#294 Post by NinjaWithAStick »

At this rate, maybe my own spark for writing will reignite...
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#295 Post by Bachaddict »

Didn't have time to reply when I read it, but thanks for continuing!
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#296 Post by Jonesy »

As planned, the time has finally come to take the story down for now, in preparation for future publishing of the re-written version. It's a pretty bittersweet moment; I've got a lot of great memories about uploading chapters and eagerly anticipating people's responses. I'd like to thank you all for following the story all these years, and I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. I'll be keeping the thread itself up for now in order to keep you all updated on where H&L goes from here.​

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#297 Post by Bachaddict »

Nice and peaceful for a change! It's good to have a more relaxed chapter.
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#298 Post by NinjaWithAStick »

*wiggles in anticipation of more*
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#299 Post by Bellhead »

Bachaddict wrote:Nice and peaceful for a change! It's good to have a more relaxed chapter.
I agree. It's nice to see everyone get a chance to settle down after all that happened.

Also, Jess sitting uncomfortably on the couch made me laugh. That was a nice touch.

This was quite a calm chapter compared to the ones before it. Nice change of pace. Well done Jonesy.

Sorry I couldn't post earlier... Life and all that.
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#300 Post by Jonesy »

As planned, the time has finally come to take the story down for now, in preparation for future publishing of the re-written version. It's a pretty bittersweet moment; I've got a lot of great memories about uploading chapters and eagerly anticipating people's responses. I'd like to thank you all for following the story all these years, and I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. I'll be keeping the thread itself up for now in order to keep you all updated on where H&L goes from here.​

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